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1st March 2016, 11:48 AM
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Free Writing Samples
hii sir, I wants to apply for the Admission in the top B Schools will you please provide me the Sample of Essays so that I may write a good Essay and get Admission into the B Schools ?
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1st March 2016, 11:50 AM
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Re: Free Writing Samples
As you wants to write a Essay for Admission into the B School let me tell you that the A top-scoring essay has a variety of clear characteristics here I am giving you some tips of Essay Writing that are as follow: Upgraded, advanced vocabulary, instead of commonly-used words & expressions Varied sentence structure, instead of only short, simple sentences Complex grammatical structures, instead of very basic ones Dynamic style, instead of lack of style Examples, details and transition words, instead of empty repetition Example of Essay Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Essay 1 – High Score – Band 8-9 In today's modern world, computers are an essential part of everyday life. Around the globe, children often use computers from a very young age. Although it is important for children to participate in various well-balanced activities, in my opinion, children who use the computer daily are actually developing a critical skill for future success. The bases for my views are personal, academic, and professional. From a personal point of view, computers are an invaluable resource to help young people explore the world around them. For example, children who use Internet to satisfy their curiosity about diverse topics are already becoming independent learners. No child with a computer is ever bored! By starting early in their lives, children feel totally at ease around computers; they are also able to take advantage of the wide range of services computers provide. Rest of the Essay you may find from the below attachment that is link of IELTS Sample Essay goodluckielts.com/IELTS-sample-essay.html |